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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:39 am 
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Another great read, I read Ryan as Rhys at 1st lol.


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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:20 pm 
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Angel: Sorry you exactly are you?


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Angel: Sorry, who exactly are you?


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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:37 pm 
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The next day Angel is sat near the bike sheds waiting for Lucy. Lucy turns up with Ryan in toe.

Angel: Hey (to Lucy)
Lucy: Hi babe.
Angel: Ryan (to Ryan)
Ryan: Ite.

Angel grab Lucy so both their backs are facing Ryan.

Angel:What's here doin here? (whispering)
Ryan: Ya can say it to my face ya know.

They turn back round.

Lucy: Me and Ryan are going out.

Lucy stands next to Ryan and holds his hand.

Angel: Oh, when did this happen then?
Lucy: Last night, I was at the skate park and Ry came up and ask me.
Angel: oh rite.
Ryan: Yeah.

Ryan whispers into Lucy's ear.

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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:09 pm 
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Lucy giggles & gives Ryan a nudge.

Lucy: Cya later babes (to Angel)
Angel: Why, Where you going?
Lucy: Just meet me at the gate at 3.(being pulled away by Ryan)
Angel: Fine whatever.

Angel felt alone again. The only friend she'd had in ages had got herself a boyfriend and being pulled away from her. Angel may look the type to have the boys falling at her feet and the girls wanting to be her but it was the complete opisite for Angel. People think she's just like the rest of the McQueen girls but she isn't.

Angel meets Lucy at the gate at 3 in hope of it just being them 2 but oh no along came Ryan in toe and then felt like a goosberry with Lucy and Ryan eating each others faces for the whole hour they was sat at the skate park, and it was like this for 2 weeks and Angel didn't like it one bit but stayed quiet for Lucy's sake and Lucy's happiness.

It's a Friday. Angel is once again sat on her own eating her lunch outside, beside the bike shed. Lucy walks up to her with Ryan in toe and sits next to her.

Lucy: Hey you! (giving her a nudge with her shoulder)
Angel: Hey.
Lucy: Guess who's got a date tonight?
Angel: Who?
Lucy: You silly.
Angel: Really? (smiling)
Lucy: Yeah, with one of Ryan's mates, he's called Dean.

That evening it's 5pm and already dark. Angel and Lucy are getting ready for Angel's date with Dean. Carmel is sat on the couch reading a magazine, Lucy goes to the bottom of the stairs.

Lucy: Say hello to sexy Angel McQueen.

Angel comes down the stairs. Her hair is in a behive style and she's wearing a white holter neck top, A baby pink ruffle mini skirt and baby pink high heels.

Lucy: Sexy or what?
Carmel: You look amazing Angel.
Angel: Thanks

Angel puts her pink coat on and grabs her white hand bag, goes into the kitchen and grabs a bottle of vodka from the fridge & puts it in her bag without carmel seeing. then leaves.
Just as they get to the park Lucy's phone bleeps.

Lucy: Sorry babe I gotta go.
Angel: No please don't leave me.
Lucy: Sorry, you'll be fine. Text you later.

Lucy walks off leaving Angel on her own. Angel sits on the bench near the kids play area and waits for her date with Dean. She waits an hour and at 6:30pm he still hasn't arrived. Just as Angel gives up on waiting for him she hears footsteps.

Angel: Hello Dean, Is that you? (standing up)

Out from the darkness steps Ryan.

Angel: Oh it's you. (sitting back down)
Ryan: Isn't Dean here? (sitting next to her)
Angel: Does it look like it? (Tears start to fill in her eyes)
Ryan: Don't cry. (giving her a nudge with his shoulder)

Angel takes the vodka from her bag and takes a swig.

Angel: Where's Lucy?
Ryan: Some family thing.

Angel and Ryan sit drinking the Vodka and chatting for an hour.

Angel: Your alright you.
Ryan: why, who told you i wasn't?
Angel: No one, just your rep and all but no your alright.
Ryan: Thanks.

They stare at each other for a moment then Ryan leans in and Kisses Angel, Angel pulls away straight away..

Angel: Woah, What you doing? (pushing him away and standing up)
Ryan: I'm sorry.
Angel: No no.

Angel walks away and home.

The next morning at school Angel is waiting in the playground for Lucy, she walks thorugh the gate and up to her.

Lucy: You cow! (hitting her across the face)
Angel: Ow! What was that for?
Lucy: Oh you know what?
Angel: What?
Lucy: Oh don't just pretend you don't know, you kissed Ryan, my boyfriend.
Angel: I didn't.
Lucy: Oh know you remember.
Angel: We was drunk, He kissed me.
Lucy: Your suppose to be my friend.
Angel: I am.
Lucy: Friends don't go round kissing each others boyfriends.
Angel: He kissed me, I pulled away as soon as I realised what he was doing, I swear.
Lucy: He said to you'll say this, don't lie to me Angel.
Angel: I'm not, he's the one that's lying.
Lucy: I hate you, just stay away from me.
Angel: Lucy! (filling up with tears)

Lucy ignores her and goes into the school.

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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:54 pm 
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At break Angel is walking down the corridor when she spots Ryan and pulls him to one side.

Angel:Why did you tell Lucy that it was me that kissed you, Why did you lie to her?
Ryan: I just did okay.
Angel: Well it's not right, tell her the truth.
Ryan: Why should i do that?
Angel: Because if you love her you'll tell her the truth, the real truth.
Ryan: No i'm not guna do that, I just don't need interfearing friends.
Angel: Interfearing, Your the one that pulled her away from me.
Ryan: Just shut it yeah or i'll tell her you did me off too.
Angel: You won't get away with it for long.

Ryan gives her the F-off sign whilst walking away.

Lucy and Ryan ignore Angel for the rest of the week. until the following friday night Angel is in her room when she gets a phone call from an upset Lucy.

Angel: What? (in a angry tone)
Lucy: Angel (quiverly)
Angel: Lucy.
Lucy: Help me Angel, help me.
Angel: What's wrong?
Lucy: Please come.
Angel: Where are you?
Lucy: In the ally.

The line goes dead. Angel jumps off her bed puts on her shoes and runs as fast as she can to the ally and finds a shaken and bloody Lucy sat on the floor.

Angel: What's happened?
Lucy: you got to help me (crying)
Angel: Lucy what happened?
Lucy: Ryan and that Dean r-r-raped me.
Angel: Oh Lucy. (cluthing her)
Lucy: I'm sor-sorry.
Angel: It's okay, c'mon we need to get you to hospital.
Lucy: NO!
Angel: Yes, your bleeding.
Lucy: I-It's not my blood.
Angel: Who's it is?
Lucy: Dean's.

Lucy goes into hysterical crying.

Angel: Sssh! Lucy you need to calm down, okay, You need to try and stand up.
Lucy: I can't.
Angel: Just try. ready on the count of 3. 1...2...3.

Angel lifts Lucy up onto her feet wraps Lucy's arm around her neck and walks her back to the McQueen house and into her bathroom, gives her a bath and her spare pair of pj's.

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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:58 pm 
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Angel and Lucy are in Angel's room. Lucy is sat at the dressing table and Angel is brushing her hair.

Lucy: Thank you for everything.
Angel: It's okay.
Lucy: No really Thank you.

Angel puts the brush down on the table, Lucy get up faces Angel and holds her hands.

Lucy: Any other person would of told me where to go but you didn't you came and helped me after how i treated you.
Angel: It's okay, anyway i knew Ryan's true colours would come out sooner or later and they did and look what happened.
Lucy: Yeah i'm sorry for not believing you, I shudda treated you better because...becuase...
Angel: Because what?
Lucy: Because you mean more to me than any lad.

Angel's heart just melts, all the feeling and thoughts she had been getting since she clapped eyes on Lucy drew in on her. Angel knew it was time, she lent in and softly kissed Lucy pulled away and Kissed her again, Lucy froze for a second.

Lucy: Sorry i can't.

Lucy leaves the room and out of the house in Pajamas.

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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
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Great work yet again, Ryan and Dean are [insert swear word here] :mad2:

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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 3:44 pm 
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The next morning Angel goes round to Lucy's, knocks on the door after a second Lucy answers the door.

Lucy: What you doin ere?
Angel: Your clothes (holding a carrier bag out with her clothes inside)
Lucy: Right Thanks (taking the bag)
Angel: We need to talk.
Lucy: No we don't, now have you finished i got a baby to watch?
Angel: Can i come?
Lucy: No you can't.
Angel: Why?
Lucy: Why, because i got a 3 weeks old baby upstairs trying to sleep oh and the fact theres nothing to talk about, me and you well they is no me and you, were not friends anymore.
Angel: Lucy, why?
Lucy: Angel you kissed me that's why, You maybe one but i'm not.
Angel: what?
Lucy: You may be a lesbian but i'm not, so no we are not friends, you get that or do i have to spell it out.
Angel: I'm sorry okay. after everythin i've done for you this is the way your repaying me.
Lucy: Not like that i'm not no, now i've got to go bye.

Lucy shuts the door in Angel's face.

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 Post subject: Re: Angel - 15 Years On.
 Post Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:38 pm 
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The next morning Angel can't be botherd going into school today so lies about being ill. Angel is in her room sat on her bed, she rings lucy, it goes straight to voice mail.

Angel: Lucy, we need to talk, please please call me back, your the only friend i've got and that i've had in a long time and don't want it to just end over some stupid kiss okay, so please find it in you to forgive me and call me back.


Angel waits all day for Lucy to phone her back but nothing. It's 8:30pm Everyone has gone to Bingo except for Angel, she is sat in watching Tv. They is a knock on the door Angel opens it, Lucy walks inside and sits on the coach.

Lucy: I don't fancy women okay?
Angel: yeah heard you loud and clear. (sitting next to her on the couch)
Lucy: But I do fancy you tho (holding her hand), you messed with my head, I've never thought about it before, me and you.
Angel: it never crossed your mind, not even for a split second?
Lucy: No, but it has now. I've missed you.
Angel: I've missed you too.

Lucy kisses Angel, she grabs her hand and leads her upstairs and into Angel's bedroom.

half an hour later Carmel and Myra get back from Bingo.

Myra: Sodding old cow , who does she think she is stealing me card and then stealing me prize, two hundred flaming quid we've lost.
Carmel: So you've said twenty times already. Were's Angel?
Myra: Probably in her room.
Carmel: I'll go and see if she's okay.

Carmel goes upstairs opens her bedroom door and turns the light on, to see a big lump and giggles coming from it.

Carmel: Alright who is he?

From under the cover appears Lucy and Angel.

Carmel: Lucy.
Lucy: Hi miss mcqueen.

Angel tries to hold in from laughing.
Carmel: Angel McQueen downstairs now!
Lucy: I'll be off.

Lucy puts on her white jean skirt and her vest top, slips into her shoes and grabs the rest of her clothes off the floor, goes down stairs grabs her bag and scrambles out the through the door dropping her pink tights behind the couch. Angel is dragged down the stairs by the wrists and thrown on the couch.

Myra: What's going on?
Carmel: Exactly what i want to now?
Angel: What did it look like?

Carmel spots the tights and picks them up.

Carmel: Are these yours? (dangling them in Angel's face)
Angel: There lucy's. (grabing them)
Carmel: well explain yourself miss
Angel: What's to explain, me and Lucy are in love, we love each other, we're going out.
Myra: Oh not another one, first our john-paul now you.
Angel: Yes i'm a lesbian. got anything wrong with that?
Carmel: No not at all.
Myra: No.
Angel: Well why you acting like this then?
Carmel: I was just in shock.
Angel: I'm going to bed.

Theresa comes through the door.

Theresa: What going on?
Carmel: Your daughter is...
Angel: Me and Lucy are going out.
Theresa: Oh okay.
Angel: Night.
Theresa: Night.

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The next morning at school Angel and Lucy meet in the playground, near the bike sheds.

Angel: Morning (smiling )
Lucy: Morning

Angel goes to kiss Lucy.

Lucy: (pulling away) eer what you doin?
Angel: Can't i give my girlfriend a kiss?
Lucy: No you can't not here anyway, lets just keep a low profile here okay?
Angel: Why?
Lucy: Because I don't want to be laughing stock of the whole school.
Angel: Fine okay (stropilly)

Angel takes Lucy's tights out of her back and throws them at her then walks off.

Lucy: Angel.

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